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| Anniston is including dialogue and feelings into her writing! |
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| We are driving to Braya's barn. I am so excited to see my friend Braya! |
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| I was laying my sleeping bag out and after I could play. |
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| We had to come in to see the movie, but we could play after. |
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| I said to my friend Braya, "I like this movie." I even got popcorn. I got candy too! |
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| Reece is such a fabulous writer! He adds great details to his writing! |
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| First, I went to the deer farm. My brother thought that he was lost but he looked back. Then he saw us. |
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| Then I fed a albino deer. This is fun! |
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| Then I wen out of the shop. |
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| Last, I went home. I felt good. We saw a hot dog place. It was fluffy. |
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| Noah is doing such a great job adding words to each of his pages! Way to go Noah! |
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| I was with my grandpa and my dad and we're getting ice cream. I had my one banana split. "Yummy." |
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| Me and my dad went to the bathroom because we can get food and we had so many waffles we were full. |
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| I went past the school. It was close to the Little Dipper. I stopped by the school. It was fun riding my bike to the Little Dipper but it hurt my back. |
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| We went back home. We were swinging on my swing set at my house. My dad built the swing set at my house. I helped him. |
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| Writer's Spotlight on...Alexis! Awesome job zooming into your small moment! |
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| We were going to Michigan's Adventure. We got in line. It was not very long. It was very short. |
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| We got in line for the photo booth. It was very short. It was not long. |
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| We got on the ride. I put my seatbelt on. Then I put my hands up. |
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| It went side to side. If felt like I was going to throw up. But I didn't. |
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| I was going on the hay ride. My mom said, "Are you sure?" "I am sure." I said. I am with my friend and I am sure mom. |
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| I screamed and someone jumped up on the hay ride wagon. I was scared and I wanted to go back to the camper. |
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| It was almost done. It was almost done. I was happy. |
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| I was scared. "I want to get out and get out," I screamed. My mom I called, "I want to go." We were going back to the camp ground. |
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| Teagan always remember to capitalize I when it is by itself! |
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| Andrew is a wonderful writer! He always tries to include many details in his writing! |
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| I was zip lining at my house. |
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| I buckled up the harness. "I can do this," I said happily. Before I knew it, I was going to fast I didn't know that I was having fun. |
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| I saw a apple tree and a cherry tress. I was going to choose the apply tree. I got the apple that was falling. |
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| It was night time. I saw the half of the moon and my daddy's fire that my daddy made. I said, "Wow that was fun." |
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| Carter is a great writer! He even tried one of our goals this week, to add dialogue! |
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| It was winter and me and my brother and Dillan were playing tag. Itwas fun and cold. |
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| Evan was it and I made a snow mountain and Evan jumped right into it. |
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| I threw snow at my brother. He made snow fly. |
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| We had hot chocolate. We said, "Yummy." |
